Kasturi kundal base, mrag dhundhat ban mahi
Jyo ghat ghat ram hai, duniya dekhe nahi
कस्तूरी कुंडल बसे, मृग
ढूँढत बन माहि |
ज्यो घट घट राम है, दुनिया
देखे नाही |
A deer has the fragrance in itself and runs
throughout the forest for finding it. Similarly Ram is everywhere but the world
does not see.
Great job with the site, it is a very worthwhile undertaking.
ReplyDeleteIn this doha, the first word of line 2 needs an additional syllable in order to be in the correct meter... Replace jyo with either 'jaise' or 'aise'.
carry on .god bliss you.
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